01.11.09 – Final Draft of Script Complete

After discussing the initial script with my peers, we became aware that the this version of the script would make the trailer more than 60 seconds. We also realised that the tour guides speech was too long for the camera to be fixed on him/her and this sequence would be anti-climax. To change this, we decided we would add shots showing flashbacks of the killer’s death, with the tour guides dialogue as a voiceover. We then decided that the ending would feature a scene with the camera easing into the area, followed by a rapid sequence of shots showing the killer as she looks following her resurrection. Additional dialogue was also added to give audiences more insight into the characters personality traits.